http://writingny.blsci.org/2008/02/20/nowhere-to-go/ Tue, 06 Jan 2009 08:04:02 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.6 http://writingny.blsci.org/2008/02/20/nowhere-to-go/#comment-1270 kmindley Mon, 25 Feb 2008 17:49:21 +0000 http://writingny.blsci.org/2008/02/20/nowhere-to-go/#comment-1270 This is a really good observation. Children often find themselves in bad situations because they have nowhere to go after school or on weekends. If teenagers had a place where they could hang out that is crime free and safe this would make society much more simplier. This is a really good observation. Children often find themselves in bad situations because they have nowhere to go after school or on weekends. If teenagers had a place where they could hang out that is crime free and safe this would make society much more simplier.

]]> http://writingny.blsci.org/2008/02/20/nowhere-to-go/#comment-1266 Sunil Ramsamooj Sun, 24 Feb 2008 01:39:52 +0000 http://writingny.blsci.org/2008/02/20/nowhere-to-go/#comment-1266 I like the way it started off with the problem. Its straight forward. Also ending with a question leaves the reader really wondering, nice writing. Asking for a little too much here but showing some bored kids or a no trespassing sign would be really effective. I like the way it started off with the problem. Its straight forward. Also ending with a question leaves the reader really wondering, nice writing. Asking for a little too much here but showing some bored kids or a no trespassing sign would be really effective.

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